Script Consulting

Need Feedback?

Writing is often a solitary business, but that doesn't mean you have to go it alone. Have a script, book or article that's not working or that could work better?  I can help.  I can also work with you to get your outline or treatment to the point where you can begin writing your manuscript.  While it may cost slightly more than a penny for my thoughts, for a reasonable rate I'll provide feedback to help you get your writing on track.

My Services

Plays and Screenplays
With plays and screenplays, you'll get my handwritten notes in the body of your script (my reactions as I'm reading), as well as a 50-minute (on a full-length work) phone conference (on my dime) about the major issues for you to consider as you work on your material. While I used to do typed summary notes, the phone conference is far more useful, as it's the perfect way to talk through your script, ask me questions and brainstorm solutions. Want industry-style coverage? I can do it, but since your objective here is to hone your script, I find that particular style of feedback less productive. I'm also happy to work with international authors via Skype.

Books and Articles
For books and magazine or other articles (as well as essays), I can do everything from proofing and minor edits to comprehensive editorial work--or something in between. Let me know your situation, and together we can decide what will be best for you.

Outlines, Treatments and Query/Cover Letters
Need help in the pre-writing stage? I can assist you in tightening your outline or treatment and in talking through story elements until you feel comfortable that they're "right." I can also coach you in writing query or cover letters to theatre companies, agents or producers that strike the right balance of professionalism, enthusiasm and confidence in your work.

For playwrights in particular, I'm happy to provide specific suggestions and strategies for submitting your work.

Internet Marketing for Playwrights
In the 21st century, the internet has become a powerful tool playwrights can use to market themselves worldwide. Even if you're a published playwright, it's not enough to rest on your laurels.  But what do you do if you're not fully comfortable in this world of new technology? Let me help you go high tech.  I can guide you through the creation of your own website, help you find sites that will list your plays, and get your name out there in cyberspace for prospective producers to find.

College Essays
We all know that getting into college is more competitive than ever, and that your college essay is a crucial part of your admissions folder. Why not get the feedback of a professional writer who spent more than a decade interviewing students for Harvard University?

Why I Can Help

Click on the About Me button on the left for details, but here are a few highlights:

  • Resident Playwriting Expert for Final Draft. Created "Ask the Expert" for playwrights in industry-leading script formatting software Final Draft, joining the screenwriting section written by the legendary Syd Field and a TV section from veteran writer/producer Larry Brody.
  • Creator of, for many years the top-ranked playwriting website on Google.

  • Resident Playwriting Expert for The Writers Store and instructor at Writers University.

  • Co-Chair of the Alliance of Los Angeles Playwrights and the former Managing Director of the Philadelphia Dramatists Center.

  • Served as Visiting Associate Professor in the M.F.A. playwriting and children's literature programs at Hollins University and as US Cultural Envoy to Barbados.

  • BA in Dramatic Writing and Literature from Harvard University and an MFA in Playwriting from UCLA.

  • Study with Robert Brustein, Leon Katz (former co-chair of the Yale School of Drama's Dramaturgy Department and considered by many to be the father of American dramaturgy), William Alfred, Adrienne Kennedy, John Glore, Velina Hasu Houston, Greg Gunter, Edit Villarreal and many others.

  • Script reader for the McCarter Theater, American Repertory Theatre, Philadelphia Theatre Company, Geffen Playhouse, Philadelphia Young Playwrights Festival and New York Theatre Workshop.

  • Teacher of dramatic writing at every level from elementary school to college and beyond, with many award-winning students.

And, of course, my own plays have been produced at theatre companies and schools in 49 US states and more than a dozen countries, and I have several produced short films to my credit.

My Philosophy

Many writing consultants advertise that they "know what sells." No one knows that. So why hire me then? Because in the absence of some magic key that unlocks the market, your goal should be to create great writing. My goal as a consultant is to help you do just that. But for me, the important thing is that what you write is the play, screenplay, book or article you want to write, not the one I would have written or the one I wish you wrote. To that end, rather than give you narrow prescriptions about "the way I would do it," I try to ask questions and make comments that empower YOU to come up with the answers that are right for your work.

For all of the details you need to get started, visit my writing consulting page, The Write Consultant, at

Co-Chair of the Alliance of Los Angeles
, member of The Dramatists Guild of America, and life member of the Philadelphia Dramatists Center.

Final Draft Resident Playwriting Expert and author of

Resident Playwriting Expert of The Writers Store.

Recent News
Take My Online Playwriting Course!

Want to study playwriting from the comfort of your home, workplace or anywhere at all?  In Introduction to Playwriting, you'll get all of the basics of playwriting and be well on your way to writing a new play, but you don't even have to get out of bed if you don't want to!  Look for a new session this summer.  Get more information and enroll here:

Three New Plays Now Available
Check out the latest additions to my catalogue!  There's a crazed one-act comedy Run Like the Dickens (the younger, shorter sibling of the full-length version), and two new ten-minute dramedies, perfect for competition and short play fests.  Straight Eye for the Gay Guy is about a gay kid who turns to his straight friend for help, and in Closeted, two teens are trapped in the closet during a game of the infamous teen rite of passage Seven Minutes in Heaven.
Playwriting Webinar!
I recently taught my first webinar:  Playwriting 101:  Everything You Need to Know to Write a Play.  While the live presentation has come and gone, you can still purchase this 90-minute presentation, which includes me answering audience questions, here:
Upcoming Guest Artist Visits

In March, I'll be at the Nevada Thespian Festival to work with their Playworks playwrights (and with lots of YouthPLAYS scripts in tow) and I'll be returning to the California Thespian Festival the weekend after to teach a pair of playwriting workshops.

Upcoming Productions
Harry's Hotter at Twilight (one-act version)
Channelview High School (Channelview, TX), April 2015
4 A.M.
North Richland Middle School (North Richland Hills, TX), April 2015
Dear Chuck (one-act version)
Coldbrook & District School (Coldbrook, NS, Canada), April 2015
Dear Chuck (one-act version)
Waller Middle School (Enid, OK), April 2015
Rumors of Polar Bears (full-length)
La Joya Middle School (Visalia, CA), April 2015
High School (non) Musical
Ilwaco High School (Ilwaco, WA), April 2015
4 A.M.
Wetaskiwin Composite High School (Leduc, AB, Canada), April 2015
Thank You for Flushing My Head in the Toilet and other rarely used expressions
Leota Youth Theatre (Woodinville, WA), April 2015
After Math
Oak Hill Middle School (Newton, MA), May 2015
Harry's Hotter at Twilight (one-act version)
Memorial Drama Group (Sydney Mines, NS, Canada)
Harry's Hotter at Twilight (one-act version)
University Academy Upper School Theater (Kansas City, MO), May 2015
Dear Chuck
Fernley High School (Fernley, NV), May 2015
4 A.M.
All Saints Episcopal (Tyler, TX), May 2015
Thank You for Flushing My Head in the Toilet and other rarely used expressions
Palmetto Ridge High School (Naples, FL), May 2015
4 A.M.
Culver High School (Culver, OR), May 2015
After Math
Oaks Christian High School (Westlake Village, CA), May 2015
Thank You for Flushing My Head in the Toilet and other rarely used expressions
St. Roch CSS (Brampton, ON, Canada), May 2015
You Should Never Eat Your Heroes
Lancaster Country Day School (Lancaster, PA), May 2015

Harry's Hotter at Twilight (one-act version)
Murdock High School (Winchendon, MA), May 2015
Dear Chuck (one-act version)
Ilion Little Theater Club (Ilion, NY), May 2015
After Math
Montevideo Senior High School (Montevideo, MN), June 2015
Harry's Hotter at Twilight (one-act version)
St. Charles East High School (St. Charles, IL), November 2015
You Should Never Eat Your Heroes: Sweeney Todd meets high school in this dark comedy, which will premiere in May 2015 at Lancaster Country Day School (Lancaster, PA)!

Thicker: Two brothers, one a twentysomething slacker and the other a high school honor student with a penchant for theft, try to get by on their own in this short play that's also in development as a short film...

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